Thursday, November 15, 2012

Alunos que Escrevem Haikais





Se trabalhar poesia com alunos pode ser traumático (para ambos os lados e em qualquer nível), pedir-lhes que escrevam poemas poderá sê-lo ainda mais.

Mas como não devemos ter medos de traumas e como logo na descida da ponte agora tem o INTO grandão, boto a galera para escrever haikais. Ou haiku, se preferirem.

Tema único: as amendoeiras do pátio.

Os que descem a rampa cuspindo raivas rosnando que não conseguirão são aqueles que, passados 15-20 minutos, apresentam-me 5 ou 6 haikais.

Para júblio das amendoeiras.

Pequena mostra da produção deste ano.

Hey, my bird
just come and see:
the same shy almond tree. 
(Julia F. Basho)

Poor pretty almond tree
so full of life
but not even free.
(Maria Clara Moritake)

Nothing's gonna stay
even the leaves
leave.
(Mariana Boncho)

Almond tree so quiet
talks louder than those
grey players.
(Lina Kikaku)

I saw an almond tree
crying
her last yellow tear.
(Stéphanie Onitsura)

A leaf leaps from the upper branch.
Another follows.
Romeo and Juliet.
(Doravne Fujiro Nakombi)

Outcoming newborn light
burst its colours
learning to fly.
(Isadora B. Yayu)

Almond tree
not only one
but three.
(Lucas Nuwanda Buson)

Almond tree
(Excuse me,
I need to pee)
(Amanda Taigu)

Under the almond tree
feeling lost
just you and me
(Julia A. Issa)

As I watch you getting green
Autumn whispers:
we meet again soon.
(Rafaella Shiki)

Green and so full of life
Will you help me
in this hard part of my time?
(Francisco Kyoshi)

Another summer, but still long I can tell
for you to be fallen cold and dead
Oh Almonds! My Almonds! Rise and feel their smell.
(Felipe Sokotsu)

I am like this almond tree
full of life
when you are with me.
(Izabelle Santoka)

The yellow we hardly see
the green came to me
Summer, have you arrived?
(Camila Hosai)

Almond tree, I like your shadows
just like your almonds
fresh.
(João Victor Seisensui)

Free fallin'
the almonds
so far.
(Thiago Soseki)

Generally we can see
but as strike stroke us
we missed the fruit of the almond tree.
(Gabriel Akitagawa)

There the trees
full of almonds
But I ate the plums.
(Fukuda Chiyo-ny)

Big big almond tree
grows and hopes and dreams
I stopped long ago.
(Sarah Gayu)

Almond tree
very pretty and
the almond flower is sweet.
(Isadora M. Engetsu)

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